This new form, this haiku analogue, is named the "crystalline" because
the core value of the form is the highly condensed and concrete imagery of the couplet,
transparent in its accessibility. On the first level, the technical criteria are really very simple.
I have said of crystallines that writing them is like weight-lifting: technically simple,
but hard to do well.
The hard part, the fun part, the real art, is developing a good ear for a
euphonious verse. Nothing works here except practice. Of course, for those of you who are
already accomplished poets and have highly developed ears for a pleasingly modulated line, the
challenge may be simply in fitting a lovely line to this strict form. When all the technique is
second-nature, and the knack of writing in the haiku tradition, but in natural English diction, is
yours, I expect and hope you will see crystallines as a viable western analogue of the classical
haiku. Here is a simple listing of technical criteria:
- A crystalline is a couplet, either regular (8/9 or 9/8 syllables) or
irregular (5/12 to 12/5 syllables maximum range).
- The couplet may be rhymed or unrhymed; in any case, do not force
rhymes.
- The couplet should consist in one or two sentences with normative
initial capitalization and terminal punctuation.
- The couplet must have exactly seventeen syllables, with deference
granted the poet for dialectical variations.
- An essential is natural English diction, carefully modulated for
euphony.
- The function of kireji (cutting words) is served by the line break.
- Use of kigo (seasonwords, keywords, etc.) is encouraged but is not
prerequisite.
- Traditional English poetic devices (e.g., metaphor, simile, alliteration,
assonance, consonance, onomatopoeia, allusion, rhyme) are permissible.
- The harmony or beauty of sound, i.e., euphony, is more important than
strict metrics. Skillful word selection to modify the rhythmic pattern, i.e., modulation, is highly
desirable.
- Crystallines may be linked by one poet or by more than one poet.
- The fundamental difference from traditional haiku is that, while
traditional haiku value direct observation with the greatest possible degree of non-subjectivity,
subjectivity is permissible in a crystalline. The poet's response to the object and the poet's
thoughts and feelings are admissible.
- The haiku traditions of natural subjects and of objective imagery / the
"objective correlative" are highly valued, albeit not enforced.